^^^^
I’m so darn close to finishing the revision (in other words,
adding meat) to A Vampire Wedding
(that title is starting to grow on me). I’m working on the second to last
chapter (which is kind of an important chapter since the next chapter jumps
ahead several months) and it’s just about done. I think I’ve filled all my
holes. At least I HOPE so!
I came up with a tag line to go with my title:
What’s said in Vegas
won’t necessarily stay in Vegas.
What do you think? Too corny?
So…Hubby is on vacation starting today (he’s using
use-or-lose vacation), so I’ve got him until the 28th. Think I’ll get any
writing done? I sure hope I do.
Have a great weekend!
Stacy
8 comments:
Good luck with your rehab; hopefully, it won't be painful and will have great results!
Regarding the tag line--just a suggestion, I wonder if a little shorter than "won't necessarily" would be better? "Won't necessarily" is kind of tongue trippy, even when said in my head.
Have a great weekend!
Congrats on all your good work this year and enjoy your time with your honey bunny home.
Good luck with the PT! Go you on the revising! You can do it! How about "What's said in Sin City won't stay in Sin City"? Then it's more yours.
Yay for having a Hubby vacation! Enjoy!
Jeff - Painful rehab?? Gosh, I hope not. I'm not hurting now!! :) As for my line: tongue trippy, huh? I kind of like that phrase!
Ivy - I'll do my best not to kill him. Haha! But really, it'll be nice to have him home. As long as I still get some work done. :)
Beth - Ooh, Sin City. I like that. I don't use that term in the novella, though. Think I should? Hmmm... Maybe Perry can use it. He'd say something like that. Thanks!!!
Totally with you on exercise - if it's not fun and easy, it won't happen.
Love the title and tagline for the novella!
Jennette - Yeah, if an exercise is complicated, I ain't bothering. Luckily, the exercises I got today should work out fine when I go to the fitness center.
The tagline is a little too wordy. I'm not crazy that it mimics the original either. I've seen other authors use take-offs from the original. The first time is kind of fun but after a while it sounds dated.
Try something more off the cuff. If I knew what what was exactly said it might help in figuring out a snappier tagline.
For example, if it was a promise or contract, you can say:
"Deals never die in Vegas"
Maria - Actually, something that was going to be shared privately first ended up being announced publicly (by accident) in Vegas, during the wedding. Thus, a similar line was uttered.
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